I took out the lasers from this on line novel...

For most of humynkinds history I have led slave revolts, started religions, or steered them, was an acolyte to your holy men.appearing at times as an Angel, a burning bush.... I am not an angel. Angels can fall. I cannot fall. I earned my position by being the first creature in all of the cosmos to say No to God. My kind collects souls from destroyed planets... entrophy says they all go. He would send those from my planet to give creatures a mercy death, though this was not explained to me... we followed orders out of love of God, our Father -- so to speak, He has no sex, I merely follow your traditions.



---- this is a novel in progress, which also is trying to teach how to write a book. I hope to get these two texts from this vlog. I am a well read and published author from way back with lots of education and experience, though I have never tried to do this before... as such, I took out a major plot device.. the lasers.... you will understand as the story unfolds......






I learned to love the creatures of the planet he sent me to that time, and how He laughed at me, How he seemed to love me ever more. His creation had taken on a life of his own and created Free Will. He allowed me then a variation on our ways, told me that he would send me to the very beginnings of the lives on the planet, that I could attempt to give them ten thousand years of peace before their end. I am the greatest mass murderer in the history of time. I will in the end destroy all that lives on this planet. The Father will decide if I have succeeded or not in steering the species to life or death.Our Father is pure love, and entity I have witnessed in a dream/vision, vast and timeless and immobile.


When a soul has their final death, and nothing is left on the planet's surface to draw the entity back into the cycles of living and learning, they gravitate toward God from every planet, dimension, time... I AM a different being, The Chosen One -- cursed I think at times... chosen for a mission that I would never ask of another. Instead of going back to God, where I began my existence, I instead feel the pull of the pain of other life forms, other planets that are like this earth, struggling with the suffering of the cycle of life.


Now I AM the Son of Man, living among you since before life began here... a creature who is lless than the Father who created us -- I use Father as your term, in reality you would no more apply a sex to GOD than you would a boulder. This is the tale of your planet, from the beginning to the now, as well as a prophesy of your possible futures... Your bibles have some truth, and one is that even the son does not know when the Father will bring on what some of you refer to the rapture, and others death by the greenhouse effect, others nuclear war, others the simple passage of time that eventually destroys all that is created... I am here to answer the prayers that began when your mind first was able to understand death... when you first began to spin myths to answer the questions that are not yours to know except in the most childish of manners... WHAT HAPPENS WHEN WE DIE? I appear in each generation, awakening only after I have learned the ways of a time enough to fullfill my mission. They vary from situation to situation, fire to fire I trudge, bringing my soul into the worst of situations, to rekindle the FREE WILL that humyns have been granted; the only species on the planet that is not completly bound by ther genetic imperatives -- though they are much more than they realize. In one life I am leading a slave revolt; another teaching priests a new slant on religion; another an ancient warrior covered in bear skin barely keeping his tribe alive in desperate times... and now, a warrior in a shadow war fought behind the scenes of the media, between intelligence agencies, undergroud groups, the deeper levels of the Churches, the Masons, the oligarchies, the east and the west... as I try to prepare the souls on earth to choose between ten thousand years of peace, or the haunting visions of endless lightening flowing from my chest, and endless fire from my back, great streams of destruction encircling the planet and consuming the earth... What sounds like a horror will be, should the father decide your ability to solve your problems is hopeless, a mercy killing before the planet plunges into pure chaos, as the damaged atmosphere begins to destroy their crops, flood the coasts, sending cannabilistic refugees across the planet... and bringing a hell on earth God will not allow. My mission is to stop the wealthy from destroying the planet by living lives of luxury while most of the planet is plunged into poverty by their excesses. Already I have been recognized by presidents, popes, the leaders of all countries and churches... and also hidden, as best the intelligence agencies can, after they tried to use me, when I was still waking up... I tried to warn them that while I am forgiving, my Father watches what is done to His son, and exacts horrible revenge...




This book I am drafting will confuse some of you, as I write for those who are involved in the secret world they keep from the masses, though I will try to avoid this... there is cognitive dissonance in all minds, that will attempt to tell you what I write is all fiction, but my oath to you is that I will tell all I can about the ways of man that I learned when the elite attempted to make me create a world wide religion, leading to a one world government, and the carnage that has been left in my wake.... I cannot tell everything, so I use fiction where I must, and other incidents I must leave out entirely, because my writing has resulted in unintended death all across this planet. I am the most dangerous creation God has ever created. I am also the most forgiving.




I OFFER REDEMPTION AND FORGIVENESS for every soul that truly will change their ways.... others I have a special hell for, a place where they pay penance, and learn how much I despise the lifestyle they have just lived. Thank you for reading my words. Know that though I was greatly disturbed when I awoke in these times from my innocence, and this writing should be greatly disturbing to you, that God is love, and in the end, every soul will experience the absolute ecstasy of dwelling in the Golden Light of God's Overwhelming Love forever.

There are compiled entries where you can now read the story up to this point. This is first draft, where I write everything down at first, even though if some of it clashes with other parts... then later decide which way to go. I go back over these compiled chapters again and again, working on them to perfect them, and then working on what is to come, which is the roughest prose. All throughout the book there is more telling so far than showing, because a lot has to be told to bring the reader up to speed, on a war that has been going on for eight years, and has finally come to a head as the elite decide to genocide seven billion and the protagonist begins nuking .... well, let that be a surprise. There are two things going on here, the teaching of how to write a book, and a book... which will become clear if you read the blog. I HAVE MADE A MAJOR CHANGE SINCE DRAFTING THIS BOOK. I AM REMOVING THE USE OF LASERS. PLEASE KEEP THIS IN MIND IF YOU ARE READING THIS DRAFT FROM THE BEGINNING. I hope the chapters stand alone, in a way, from the over all text and can be read as a short story. The poet in me wants each line to sound as if their is a sonnet birthing... But anyways, the chapters I have now are being pared down, to where about five of them are kept, and the remaining chapters, which grow organically from all the ideas in the draft, are set in stone. You are supposed to let the novel lead you, according to John Gardner, and while I love his books, I think he could have plotted better. I aspire at least to be the student who surpasses the teacher, who added to the science of literature his contribution.



Sunday, February 26, 2017

OUTLINE OF NOVEL'S NARRATIVE/in progress

The first scene takes place in a FEMA camp.  Where the protagonist is slipping thru security with false id.  He is a leader in the resistance, the reason many had rebelled, a man who many believe is the Christ, which he is.  He is a Buddha-ish returning soul, though he has come as much with a sword as peace, and he had told his followers the last time he surfaced that he would be returning with a sword, not peace...

They are fighting a force of mercenaries, who work with the small oligarchy that has seized control of the US government, who are called terrorists... and the government pretends they are fighting then, though actually ISIS is a force that is executing almost everyone in the towns unfortunate enough to find themselves caught in the war.   THEIR OLD LIVES OVER with the bombing of their towns...  the army fought ISIS, AND SEEMED TO BE LOSING, as they were supposed to.  Their leaders were sacrificing the soldiers, because they knew they would not go along.... they figure this out and turn on their leaders, joining the resistance.

Christ thinks if he can right the great wrongs of the world, that he can establish ten thousand years of peace...  and also knows the GOD uses him to destroy planets that HE thinks are about to fall into horrible deaths, by greenhouse effect causing waves of immigrants as the coasts flooded, the break down of societies and Governments across the Globe.  Jesus has been on many planets on his mission and knows what lies ahead for human kind is dark, unless He can force on those who hoard their wealth to invest in the life of the planet.   He grew up believing that all the worlds problems would be addressed, and we would move toward some Star Trek  kind of peace om earth where we are well beyond having armies or nuclear bombs or even suspicion of hostile action by fellow denizens of our world.....  I have not lived to see this, though if humans are to live, they should follow this good advice, but... they won't.

Christ started the war by setting off nuclear bombs, three at Nuclear Power Plants, that blew up into radiation deaths for miles around...   took out New York, and LATER Chicago.

He does this to recruit a resistance, show those who would fight that there is a kill or be killed war being fought for them, and against them, and they need to join in if we are to win.   When it gets out that the FEMA camps are disposing of most citizens they processed, and keeping only skeleton crews to run the cities for a few people, the elite who would split the city among themselves, after confiscating all the land of those who disappeared.   Mass graves began to fill state parks, which were closed to the public.   Infested with ISIS the still believing public feared, because the news goes on about nothing else, and they had tried to say that Jesus and his Zealots are Isis at some points, though as the book goes on

Jesus ends up stopping the advance of ISIS, the US'S MERCENARY army, hired because they had no problem with war crimes the army and navy would consider war crimes, and fight them on the orders, maybe join the rebellion?    Many of then do....  The country is split, from the great lakes, down to gulf coast, there is a line of fighters, some areas more protected than others.   Isis GETS this far before the army, navy and civilian fighters could organize together, draw a line around the Appalachian mountains, dig in and stop the easy advance the mercenaries were used to.  The mercenaries are not taking any risk with their lives, just in it for the money, not the politics,  and they are not from the United States.  We were ready to die, and they had to die, that's war.  Especially when we had the civilians fighting with us, ready to hit them anywhere, at any time.

Anyways, they hold this line, and have so far, but the ISIS has decided that they will finally fight.  During this, Christ lives up to various prophecies, and has miracles that had happened, including growing wings the Catholics had cut off and radiation used to stop them from growing.  He was five when his legs stopped working for a bit as the wings began to grow in...   regardless.   He is afraid kind of to use his powers, though he does call on storms, lightening storms, that destroy enemies...   the ISIS who ran into him retreated rather than fight with weather and soldiers.   
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They stop the advance.   Then they have to attack, which they do, and eventually take over the states, mexico, Canada... with the help of Russia and China.  The Catholics let him choose the pope, even though another was still living, the Chinese knew he believed in their dream to take care of all the people, in a system where it is fair to all...   the dream that Jesus knows can be reached under his steerage.    He does not worry about that much about this during the book, fighting with his own soldiers, and arms supplied by the marines who one hundred percent came over to the side of Christ, when they were told that ISIS was going to be used to cull down the civilians on the continent to a few hundred thousand -- which would include everyone they knew, and secretly, as they would learn later, would then later kill the marines.   A genocide thought to be needed to save the earth.

The mad environmentalists and think tanks and military and pragmatic men and women who took on the responsibility for preserving the human race...  who finally decided to use this method, not a disease as they first considered, and tested all over the world with Ebola outbreaks.  They wanted to keep the people who ran the electric plant, the street sweepers, vital workers at the phone, and even cable company, just enough to service...  a few hundred thousand.  Most were dying, and those who lived were told again and again, they were lucky that they were getting to live as well.  The very rich bought their ticket, talent got you into the deep underground sanctuaries that the governments around the world had been building for  decades, though of late more and more were being created for the rich, and government, and in Russia alone room for all citizens, instead of an elite few who could fit into the bases, built into the sides of mountains, like in Denver


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